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The Journey Beyond The World We Know 1

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"Don't do things to other's that you wouldn't want others to do to yourself." That's what i've been told my whole life. But now... It's different... It started during a regular saturday evening. I was skii-ing with my littlebrother. I often teased him for being so slow skier, and so i did now too. He's really easy to scare and it was already dark outside, so i decided to pull him a prank. I went as fast as i could and left my brother crying for me to come back. Now would be a good moment to mention that he believes in ghosts and monsters. Well i left the poor guy trying to catch me and looked if he was following me. He was. Slowly he was trying to catch up with me. I went faster. He also tried to pick up the pace but he's so young that he was unable to do so. I was already over one hundred meters from him. I looked behind myself to check if he's still trying. I saw him ski-ing by a tight curve. He suddendly tripped and fell. The point where he tripped was near a cliff where my mom had told us to be really careful on. I Arrived to the cliff. He wasn't there. He had fell. I looked down the cliff and there was. He didn't move. At all. I went down as carefully as i could and took his hat off. His head was bleeding. I got really scared and started to panic. I picked him up and started running towards home as fast as i could. Then. Suddendly my bro woke up. He started struggling and managed to get off my hands. He dropped on the ground  and quickly stood up. He then immediately started running away from me. He didn't say a word. Just ran. I started chasing him and called him by his name. He didn't answer. He just ran. We were in complete darkness. I honestly didn't know at all how long we ran nor where exactly were we. Then I started to feel i was at my highest point. I couldn't run anymore. But he could. He was like he didn't tire at all. With the last of my strenght i jumped on his back. We both fell down and i took a good grip of him. He looked into my eyes. That was when i noticed something's not right. He didn't look like himself at all. His pupil's were red and there was blood all over his face. He looked really pissed. He grabbed my throat and picked me up. He was suddendly a lot taller than me. I screamed in agony as he continuously hammered my head with his fists. I started to feel dizzy and passed away. I don't know what happened after that until i woke up. I was alone. No sight of my brother. But the enviroment seemed different. The trees looked all dead and the snow was moreso gray than white. I started to yell for help. No-one answered, but that was kind of expectable, since i had no clue where i was. I stood up and looked around. No lights coming from anywhere but the sky. I looked up and noticed something that was beyond belief. The sky didnt look normal. The stars and the moon had a reddish glow, and just looking at it caused my head to ache. I started feeling dizzy again. This time not from continuous clubbering, but simply hunger. I started walking off and thought to myself that maybe i'm just hallucinating. Yeah that's why everything looks so messed up. I walked for hours, until i saw a faint light far from me. I started yelling for help. The light started swaying. It got closer to me. I just looked at it getting closer to me. I saw the light's carriers feet. It looked kinda weird. He had no shoes and his feet were in very bad shape. I looked up and noticed his face. It was the scariest thing i had ever seen. His face was all rotten and bleeding. His other eyesocket was empty and his other eye was just staring at me. His jaw had presumably fallen off since the lowest thing you could recognize from his face was his upper teeth. They were completely deceased and most of them had fallen off. He stared at me and i stared back. I felt hopeless."RUN!" Someone yelled. I started running. The "thing" started chasing me but since it was absolutely decayed it couldn't run fast. I looked behing me and saw someone behind a tree jump at it. He kicked it in the leg. The leg smushered off and some unidentified liquid sprayed off of it. The creature shrieked with a terrible noise. The person who had stroke it's leg off now punched it in the stomach. It's back broke off and all of it's diseased and abscessed internals leaked out of it's body. It fell on it's knees and shrieked even louder. The unknown guy then kicked it it the face and it's face smushed into the air as millions of small drops of what used to be it's head. The creature then collapsed on the ground. I shaked a lot. "What if this guy didn't intend to save me, but just kill the monster before moving up to me." I though. He turned to me. His eyes looked cold, but intellectual. He had a serious expression and a constant frown on his face. His clothes were all black. He had black leather boots, black jeans, black zippered hoodie and on it he had a open black leather jacket. His hair was about "upper back lenght" and he had half of his face covered with his front hair. "Are you allright?" He asked. "I-I'm ok i suppose." I answered stuttering. "Don't get in too close contact with those. If they manage to touch you, you might get deceased, and you might turn into the same as they are." He said. "A-Are they z-Zombies or something?" I asked with a shaking voice. "No. They're something much worse than that. These my friend are what human's become under the control of satan." He said quickly. "SATAN!?" I asked with disbelief. He answered with even more serious expression."Didn't you believe in god? Well in that case here's a rundown of this place. This is what most call "The Alterned Earth". It's practically the same as normal, but it's ran by satan. Everyone whom he see's here gets "deceased" and gets all of his mind cleared off. There is no way of recovery to whom you have been before you got infected. By the way. Why are you here? Only betrayors of god get thrown here." "I- I don't know... I just woke up here after getting beat up by my brother. He seemed abnormal. He even grew in size!" I told him. "Well he must have transported you here. You see, when somebody has so much hatred towards a person, satan might get advantage of the situation and turn the person into a demon by the vurnerability of the angered person. Most of the time after that they bring their hated someone here. They must bring the person to the "shrine" first. Those are the portals that transport people here. There hasn't been a way to get out of here yet though. But you must be hungry. Sadly there's no real food here. All you could eat is that Deceased since after you've killed it it doesn't hold the virus anymore." He told me and looked at what's left of the rotten creature. "WHAT!?" I yelled in complete fear of what he just suggested to me. "Yeah it's the only way of survival here. I kinda like this place though, even though it has the food problem." He told me. I picked up some unidentified piece of the creature. It was hairy and all of the skin on it had melted. It was severely deformed. I tried biting it. It tasted absolutely terrible. I puked on the ground and coughed out all the pieces of it. "You'll get used to it." The guy said. "But we must go. We can't leave lingering here. This place is full of demon's and Deceaced Souls, since it's near one of the shrines." He added and pulled me away. He took me to an old shackle. "I've built this from what i've been able to use. It's not much but it keeps the cold outside." He told me. We sat down on the floor. There wasn't any furniture in there. Just a small pile of sticks where a campfire could be made. "So could you explain all the "demons and deceaced souls" stuff to me?" I asked. "Allright, demon's are descendants of satan and serve under him. Deceaced Souls are what comes of people if they sin against god too much during their lifetime. Becoming a Deceased Soul mean's that your body will start to rot and you will get completely deformed. Like i said before, their minds also get cleared and all they can think of after that is food, which basically means that they will eat anything that comes in their way. After it dies it will be released of it's curse and it will reborn on earth to re-try living as god has wished him to. If he fails again, he will end up here again. The reason for what happens to people after death is satan's hate towards people, and if a human doesn't live by god's orders, god abandons him, and satan takes him here and turn's him into these horrid creatures. After they die here, their souls get released and their punishment from god is complete." He told me while setting up the campfire. I noticed a pentagram on his right hand. "Where did you get that?" I asked and pointed at his hand. "From the same people who also gave me this." He said and moved his hair off of his eye. His eye was completely white and that half of his face had a bloody inverted cross. "I got these before i was thrown here. The townspeople always hated me because they though i was a satanist, because i was fascinated of darkness and death. When i started telling other people about how these things aren't always evil, they carved these marks on me and sealed me here because they thought that i'm one of satan's bred." He told me. "How horrible... You must feel awful..." I told to him. "Not really. I did in the beginning, but as i learned more and more of this place, I started to feel like home here." He answered. "But how come you didn't get turned into a odd creature?" I asked him. " I suppose it is because I haven't truly stood against god. " He answered to me while setting down in the floor to sleep. "But now we should rest. I'll teach you more of this place tomorrow. And don't worry about getting caught while in this building. The Deceased Soul's are easy to keep out of here. If demon's get here we might be in trouble. Or just you would be in trouble. They'd think I'm one of them because of these marks. That's another mentionable thing about demons. You see, god created his creatures to be wise and capable of thinking freely. This caused some of them to turn to satan's side. Satan then didn't want his creatures to get the idea to stand against himself so he didn't give them the ability of thinking anything than their duty." He told me. "Well thank's it sure makes me feel better to know that YOU'RE safe from them while I'M not!" I yelled at him. "It's not my fault really. I can carve you these marks too if you wish me to." He said with his emotionless voice. "No thanks. "sigh"... Let's just sleep." I answered and layed down on the floor. I layed there for hours but i couldn't do else but wonder about what happened to my brother.
First part of a story i made up. I'll upload the rest too if this is liked.

It might have quite many typos, but try not to focus on them.
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COngratulation man,i love this,it is marvellous,the way you are melting the "elements" are great, i applause,and congratulate you,and once again,encourage you to continue...Even if you wrote it time ago and i don't know which is your link with the writing now (: